"mom yelling like someone done a crime."
Should be did a crime
That was the main error I saw.
Butt wow very sad and deep. But remeber this alright Cutting IS Never the answer. I know what you are going thro with the family thing trust me.. I have a lot going on my mom always yelling at me too.

But it takes a strong person not to cut the pain away. I am hear if ou ever need to talk. But please no cutting.

But Good job at the poem tho.

Ummm

Please dont

Oh wow. This was very very deep. Cutting is never good. It may help with the pain, but believe me you are just hurting yourself more. You really brought through some true emotions in this piece. I could feel them. Wow. Like Amber and DJ said "don't." Keep writing. 5/5

Omg i feel so much like this like all the time