Comments : Death in His Eyes

  • 15 years ago

    by Frederick Mayer

    Taken one way, this could orally be delivered as a "Bard" of old passing on the tale among fellow poetic souls and those of the circle. Personally, I don't think there isn't anything really "unique" about this piece/or contents, but like a good Blues tune the presenter takes it, makes it their own, and, then, like the more talented ones, successfully passes it's whole onto others...this is executed with a quiet grand apomb of being...this poet has been able to create something of the printed word format and allows it to transcend to seemingly play the very sinews of the receivers/readers! Thank you.

  • Oo nice work...the title caught my eyes and i just had 2 read it. and im glad i did to! keep up the good work..i would give you more than a five on this poem but i cant...

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. this was amazing. i loved it. goodjob. dark, chilling and emotional.

    --aprilsconspiracy