A genesis so simple, as the white in which we delight,
In oblivion of the end, will it be as bright?
Everything is a first, from the word to the step,
And all around you is glee, from those past the first step.

Most wonderful lines.........loved the whole poem in general.Only one thing, the 5th stanza 3rd line 'friends and flows "....did you mean 'foes'??

1gray1 bygrace...thank you for the correction! Indeed I meant foes and not flows....

Very strong and meaningful lines. A thoughtful write. I enjoyed your writing. You have a talent to write. Good to see you here. I'll keep reading your poems. This one is very good. Well Done!

You completely blew me away with this poem!
I am so glad you commented to one of my poems, for know I had the chance to meet you!
I have a feeling you have more of these gems in store for us...
Keep writing, sweetheart:)

5/5 Ingrid