Such a lovely tale of fairytale moment. You have described to well the walk to the wedding car, together with the thoughts, some happy, others apprehensive and all completely natural.

This stanza hold the true weight of this poem, well for me anyway:

Your eyes hold it all,
Every thing I'll need to know.
I'm gonna embrace our future tightly,
Hoping you also won't let go.

We all hope that waht we invest in will work out well for us. A marriage made in heaven..I sincerly hope so!!

Well done on writing this and capturing more than the image played out. I believe good poetry leaves the reader pondering between and beyond the poets lines. You did for me and I am pleased that you have the skill to do so! :)

Michael

Kayla Kayla Kayla.... How do you do it?
I reallt love your poetry. Your awesome!
I love the emotion in this piece and I was able to picture everything. It gave me chills. I'm talking on the phone with my friend and I read this poem to her... she loved it! She says your awesome!

Love ya!
10/10 <3