Comments : Uncontrollable feelings

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    This was an amazing poem. powerful, emotional, and deep.

    The walls around us crumble
    Baring vulnerable skin for you too touch
    Will you touch me
    Do you dare too
    Or will your finger tips only feel the ice that I'm covered in

    ^ that was my favourite part . beautiful.
    goodjob

    --aprilsconspiracy

  • This was an amazing poem. powerful, emotional, and deep. and i justed loved it. keep up the great work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice, i really liked your poem. keep up the good work. ^_^