I think your work is awesome.

good to read thank you 5/5

"We attack and kill
At enormous pace
Just for the thrill
Of winning the never ending Rat Race"

good job.

This poem is amazingly real! Its so true. I loved this write so much. Each stanza is so well written, it flowed so brilliantly and ur wording was just excellent. This is definatly going into my favorites. Verrry good job. 5/5