I can really relate to this one

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I'm crazy enough, but my fragile ,ind
I'm crazy enough, but my fragile, mind

"These, my friends, are our dreams. "

amazing finish to a great poem :) Very inspirational, well writen and emotional :) Personal yet relatable :) Amazing :)

It's good. It makes me think of myself when I read it, especially the second time around. It's what we all dream and wish for, but yet we know its not possible. very relate-able. Good work