Comments : There is no point

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    This piece of work was quite creative. you expressed yourself very well, and got your message across perfectly. a great opening, and a great ending. i loved how you compared everything, it was unique. i don't think i've seen that in a poem before. you did an excellent job. keep it up! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.