Comments : "LOVE"

  • 17 years ago

    by Driver

    Wow... this was really good... well written, it seemed to flow together nicely... wasnt forced it seems... keep it up...
    Driver

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. loved this one! short and sweet.. the descriptions were beautiful and you fitted in a lot of emotion and imagery 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    I think that this was the best poem of yours that i've read so far=D..although i found one thing:(sorry im so picky)
    the 3rd stanza was not like the rest because it didn't rhyme like the others did. that gave this stanza a flat feeling and it deflated the cloud on which this poem sat by a bit. if that makes any sense. what i mean is it gave the poem a bit of a lower quality. but other than that this poem was amazing! 5/5 for sure, just if i were you i would try to make that stanza rhyme, thats all=D

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohmygosh. I 'heart' it! It's so so true love is all of what you said. Ha. Wow.. I really enjoyed this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this reminds me of someone who broke up with someone and they found someone new who they loved more then anything....well i hope thats what this poem was about lol....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow! I loved this poem, each line was so short, but so beautiful, it all came together perfectly and it's amasing how you could tell a story with so few words. Great work!

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    This is great!!

    ~shanny~