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Thats how i feel with my Baby girl :(... I know me n her cant last. She Saved my life From a life of Suicide and depression.. Now i know her parents wont accept me so instead to get away im joining The navy Lol and have been accepted Nice poem. 5/5 It really captures ur emotion

Its really lovely poem u wrote. Im talkin 2 somone but its long distance, and i miss him lots. good job on writing the poem.