Hey great poem. great use of words. 5/5

Interesting poem, kept me entertained the whoel way

Beautiful. Keep writing. You're amazing :)
~Kayla

Waky Waky, my princess, your dream is no more
You might feel bad, and you will feel the sore
But at the end, you life will no longer leek
It is time to wake, *kiss you on your cheeks

^^^^ A very sweet ending to a sweet poem. How we all wish that our words could truly reach the other...sometimes all our efforts are futile and nothing can be done to change that. When you have given all you've got, then you should be at peace with yourself...what else can you do?

Take care!

5/5 Ingrid

This was a very strange, but intriguing poem. I had to read it twice to get it.

I really love this and how this person is in 'dream land' I love how you never drop that throughout the whole poem and you just say how it is.

This was very well written, you could watch the syllables abit, but other than that...it was an awesome poem.

5/5

I love this poem!
It is so cute. ;) ^^

No, honestly, very nice use of words and a very very creative idea.

Great job!

Wow, what a great poem. It was very creative and i also like the way you kept the 'dream' happening all the way through the poem.

You should beguine to accept what you feel for me
^^
Do you mean, begin?

But to me your heart is simply handcuffed
^^ i really like the concept of your heart is handcuffed.. i think that is very clever, so awesome job. Basically you are saying that they do not let their heart out to love.. but in an extremely original way.

But at the end, you life will no longer leek
^^
I think this should be 'your life will no longer leek.

Other than that, Fantastic, great poem which really.. it was fantastic. It wasnt so straight forward, which made it very interesting to me.
Keep up the great work.
5/5

Once again great job i really like your poems I will keep reading 5/5 Caleb Poet With A Purpose

Aww, this was verry cute and sweet. Love the flow of the poem and the wording. A really great poem

Great Work.

Awww very beauitly writen u love reading ur poems it's like the word's are ment for me i wish i had a man like u in my life who is as sweet and caring and lovble like u.