I really really love this poem. i really do. it was written as though it was told straight from the heart and there wasnt a stanza that i didnt enjoy reading.
there were four lines in particular that stood out to me, however the others were all fantastic as well.

This feeling of hurt set in my heart,
Is beginning to tear my whole world apart.

^^ your opening two lines were fantastic. really caught my attention, well done.

We started talking and joking and I said about you,
She said that's funny cause Im seeing him too

^^ these were also fantastic, as they described what so many people experience, but in a very unique way did you write it. Very well done indeed.

this was a terrific poem.
5/5

Very well written. i feel as though as i can take a walk in your shoes reading this. i know what it feels like to have someone stab you in the back it sucks but eventually things do get better. 5/5 great job

Beautiful! (: 5/5 x