Comments : With You Gone

  • 9 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    Oh my god Sam...i SO can relate to this poem....i mean i lost my dadd w/out saying goodbye one last time.... :(:(:( .....im SO SORRY......i feel ya gurl...i guess i never really did wanna move on with my life.....but i DID learn how to cope with it tho.....and i love ya gurl....dnt EVA 4get that...!!!!!.... great poem tho tooo....5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Theres a bit of repetition that could be fixed up in the first stanza , but otherwise this poem is really filled with emotion & really well worded . 5/5