And so my belief resting in the chest of loss
and is my loss resting in the vastness of disbelief

Awesome words!!
Every time I read any of ur poems, I get more impressed..I cannot be compared to u..
Unfortunately, I can't find enough words to describe how much I liked ur poem..
U are a great poet..
Keep up the good work and wish ya all the best;)

This piece is just so amazing..perfect in all ways.
I can tell from reading this poem that I'm reading a famous poet's poem..just like those we always heard of :]

Worry not O God, worry not Death and Life
for in the day rests the night
and in the night rests the day

This part astonished me..I really love it, I liked the contradictory words in the lines..very powerful and just awesome :)

This piece is flawless !
Write on

I agree with those commenting before me. this was very well written and you chose the right words and placed them perfectly. Nice work here.