Comments : Time to Fly

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Tick, tock. Tick, tock.
    Sounds of incessant ticking,
    fill my lonely ears.
    Yearning for a different song,
    leaning myself into a brighter light."

    Enchanting opening paragraph, I like how you use the word "incessant" for ticking, it had a great affect, and I love your style of writing and this was an interesting and enjoyable write to read. Nice job! Keep writing, always and forever...5/5 from me...take care