Comments : Tears Are Words the Heart Cannot Say

  • 15 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Awww this is beautiful! The rhyming was very well put and the spelling and grammer wonderful! Great message by the way, life can be great, even when life is at its worst, be optimistic. I hope you win!

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Words Selective .. I like that 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Again well written tears facinate me and i also wrote a poem a while ago called tears, and what i think about them. This poem was interesting in as much as tou mention tears speaking words, and it is so true , tears can be such an expressive thing i think you got the general message of your poem across very well
    Good job

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Anthony

    Awesome!!! lol i dont deal with all that smart word stuff.. i could but i dont wanna.. lol just wanna tell u i love this poem =D

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow , this is just an excellent poem, Wow i loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Tears are actulay screams that the heart make you hear
    they are the expression of love hate , fustration and fear
    you expressed good adn touch the right spot
    it means huges to other and to me a lot

    i am with everyword you said and you will say
    with your words now you jsut made my day
    you deserve a perfect score on this one here
    you will receive a five on voting and plus a cheer
    ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    Flawless poem only sketchy thing is the very last line it feels like A: a let down from the rest of the poem picking it up and it wasnt the ending i was hoping for and B: the flow is broken in the last line but I guess that's ok because it is the last line, it was a VERY good poem, I only like poems that acutaly hit my heart this is one of them, favorited.

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Wicked awsome poem, keep up the great work. lol. 5/5
    Aaron