Comments : Bespeak This Heart

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    The heart in solemn humble lies
    With dreams upon the stars to wish
    As surely as the soul should hide
    Upon the crest of moonlight's kiss

    this is truely amazing, great choice of words and so beautifully presented.
    Great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a beautiful piece. your words just flow wonderfully.

    The heart in solemn humble lies
    With dreams upon the stars to wish
    As surely as the soul should hide
    Upon the crest of moonlight's kiss

    I loved these lines.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy