Comments : David, My First Love

  • 15 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    Oh the spoken truth! I'm going through this right now. What an amazing poem..I really like it =) keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    Awww:}
    i rlly like this poemm!!
    i'm also in love with a guyy named david...
    he's also myy first love...
    this is one of my fav. poems:]
    it rlly relates to what i'm feeling...

    it also flows rlly well n its full of true feelings:]

    well keep on writting!! :D
    i rlly think you have talent:)