Exceellenntt, just what i needed, a workout for my tongue lol.
It was fabulous :]
Give your all, when you fall, you'll still stand tall.
^^ Jeeeezzz. i had trouble to begin with, with that one lol.
Really great write Ingrid, its true, if we stand tall, believe in ourselves, we will get far :]
Very inspirational write Ingrid.
The flow was good, the wording was great and i loved it.
Very well done! :]
See the love I have for this piece??? =P haha.
I truly loved it my great Ingrid.
You penned it beautifully..I'm impressed !
I can't pick my fave lines..they're all dazzling..and someone dizzying, lol
Keep writing !
I am tried and out of breath after reading this. It flows well and I found myself reading faster and faster through each line. It is a different style for you but I really like it. Now I feel like running and that I can do anything I dare. Good job. 5/5
Uhm, you gave me a headache lol. Wow, you dont see tongue twisters wrote that often around here.. I`m glad to see someone was brave enough to take up such a difficult challenge and in the end come out victorious. This piece was definatly a tongue twister but flowed well while holding a meaning.
Well done ingrid i love this poem wow what more can i write.
5 years ago
by Tara Kay
Well, Ingrid, this is the first time I think I have been left speechless, I read this really fast in my head, and will read it aloud as soon as is possible. I love how unique this is, because I haven't read a poem like this before, maybe that is just because I never searched for one, and the like but I like uniqueness.
Breathtakingly amazing...and such a powerful message within
Wow Ingrid! This is a great poem, reflecting your attitude to life without a doubt!
I liked this 'strong' poem with its very uplifting message a lot.
I feel like going outside now and running round the block!
It is good and as I say, very uplifting and a message for our down troden times I think!
We would all do well if we all read your message me thinks! Wonderful poem Ingrid!
A lovely fast past tongue twister. Ben would love the rhyme for sure as do I. This poem is much more than fun rhyming words. Its inspirational. Its freedom. Its love for others, but more important, its the importance of love for yourself. Without this capacity its difficult to love another without doubt. Your words: I can fly, will cry, touch the sky high high; show me how free you are. Images like, hair waving on a breeze and sparkling. eyes are magical and paint a vivid picture of blissfulness.
I also like the hand you hold out, the words of encouragement. A first step is all it takes and, if you fall you still stand tall. Ingrid you are testament to your own preaching. You are working so hard to acheive your goals and though at times you may have doubt you find strength. This strength is yours and stems from the love and respect you have for yourself. Those around you bask in your light.
Ingrid, I want to give back just a little by saying, thank you for sharing your love with me.
Wow, your words sure brightened up my day, dear Michael:)
Long may our friendship continue!
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Ben would Love the rhyming?
I saw these words on my thread and came running, Ingrid. And I do indeed! Your use of internal rhyme here is marvellous - I almost turned my hypothetical cap around and started rapping it!
Well done and all the best,