Excellent poem.5

....Kudos, it rhymed and flowed perfectly :D I loved it very much
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Tiffy

Excelent poem.. i love the repeats. it makes what your saying stronger.. :) .. rhyming is great it just flows :) haha 5**s :)

I..LOVE...THIS...POEM!!LOL!I REALLY DO IT JUST SCREAMS OUT MY NAME AND EXACTLY HOW IM FEELING!YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!GOD BLESS YOU!=]

WOWZA I LOVED THIS POEM ITS ALL THAT IM GOIN THREW N WELL I HOPE TO SEE MORE LIKE THESE WELL TATA FOR NOW LOL

HUGS N BEST WISHES
KATIE 5/5

Great job. I liked reading this one alot. It has a nice flow and the repetition works wonders on the impact of the emotions and words on the reader. Great work Keep it up.

Rebbeca

Amazing!!