Mere instants scattered
Upon lazy afternoons
With hope and faith we tarried
Beneath the breath of starlit moons

^I love this last part of your first stanza, the last line just brings it home for me, very nice.

Your flow was pretty good and I like the story you were telling, it felt so sadly romantic. I really enjoyed it. Nice work.

Perfect days of wonder
Met passions of the night
^^^
I love these 2 lines.

Awww the ending was just so touching. When forever ends ... the thing we think will never happen and then it slaps us in the face.

Touching read Auntie ....