Hmm... this is a strange one i read so far i realie didnt understand it. just cuz my brian is slow n stuff.
but the ending of it i realie did like it.
nicely done

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I like the way it's done, although, I think my brain is slow today as well...n stuff. Wanna' pm me on your idea?

I liked it. I don't see anything that needs fixing. Nicely worded.

gave it a 5/5