This sounds more like a song. a very lovely song. like seeing the future the words u would say to your love one are yet not been told. i lubit!!! =]

How did I write this song
For the girl that I just met
How did I find the words
Cos I always seem to forget

How did I reach deep down
And pick my soul up off the ground
How did I find these words
How did I hear this sound

these are my favorite parts cuz it pulled me into ur poem. i love it. amazing job
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

This is fabulous. The rhyming is perfect. Well done :)