Comments : Love or Lust and Other Crazyness

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    The words of this poem are so true.. Another great write.. so very well penned. You touch the realities of life with your words. I also love how your poems rhyme so easily.. and have a great flow.

    Take care..and please keep writing!

  • 9 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    I loved the idea of the poem, which is true for me at my current impasse, a gentle reminder to look before we leap, however, something doesn't flow right with the last line for me. But good write all the same.