I liked this write. I thought it was really creative and unique. I loved your choice of wording and it was kept sort of simple, and wanst forced. But i must say that i thought your flow was a bit off in some parts though. But apart from that its an excellent piece. 5/5

Wow this a very good poem. i'm adding it to my favorite. you should write more. you have a great talent. Shanik

Wow very good work your a good writer looking forward to reading more ????

Wonderful