Comments : Like A Lie

  • 8 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I liked this write. I thought it was really creative and unique. I loved your choice of wording and it was kept sort of simple, and wanst forced. But i must say that i thought your flow was a bit off in some parts though. But apart from that its an excellent piece. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow this a very good poem. i'm adding it to my favorite. you should write more. you have a great talent. Shanik