Great poem Saul. The only thing I suppose we have left to ponder about is what happened in order for us to be the ones being shunned? It's something to think about. I liked the flow and the emotion. You can tell what it was you were feeling and thinking. It's as thought the reader is in your place with the cloudless sky staring up at it with the communication of unknown kinds. Great work.
O.m.g this was such a touching , amzing poem you wrote here. it almost made me cry and i am 100% serious here. almost very imagnie, your word had me breatless. your flow was prettie good. n i love every single word you have writen here. one of my top favorite poem from here. wonderful job trulie.
please do keep it.
Very nice work Saul. I love the imagery. I feel like I'm looing at the sky with you. I like how the mood chnages from something peaceful like watching the stars to something heartbreaking. Nice work. Nik