Aww... wow i like this poem a lot... I love how you wrote it like a story... and the way you expressed the love of a long distant relationship... it's just so nicely done!
I loved these lines:
"They ciouldn't be closer
Even though they couldn't be further apart
Sometimes the longing gets to be too much
But then they think of the other.
And eveything feels right again.
She keeps him close in her dreams.
He keeps her near in his mind.
He loves her; she loves him."

Good job!

This was difficult to read because it was so simple. I found myself skipping everything because everywhere there is a 'and', 'she', 'her', 'it', words that don't actually add anything to the plot or story. If you took all those words away (which is a good excercise), you're left with your story. You 'told' us something here, you didn't show it through emotion, or imagery, or metaphor, and what we're left with is a...skeleton of a story. It's your job to flesh it out a bit, to make it interesting.

Bits like:

'They ciouldn't be closer
Even though they couldn't be further apart'

Spoonfeed the reader. Reader's don't want to be spoonfed.

'And while he waits his mind wanders.'

This could be expanded a lot more; and you should be asking yourself what each line adds to the story. The caps lock isn't needed at the beginning of each line, only when you use a full stop.

I can't really say much more than to just expand on this a lot more, give it substance cause at the moment, it's just bare bones.

There was a lot of pronouns in this piece like she, he, his, her, ect. ect. which made the poem become extremely cluttered and confusing at times because it kind of made the poem all that more difficult to read.. however if you read it slow you understand the point of the poem. I thought that you did well with this, your poems are different from other poets. I dont know what it is, but your poems just have more length to them, and some arent always necessairly poems, but maybe like a paper or something like your House Divided one. Theres just something unique about you :]

A decent job.
5/5

Temps!

*They ciouldn't be closer*
you got a spelling error there.. ^^

mmmh.. i liked the way it's hopeless, then at the end.. it just isn't. A little bit confusing at first, but when you read it a second time it's better.
But switching to one to ther other was interesting. Showing both feelings
nice poem ^^