Wow Skye. There isn't enough good things that I can say about this. It was an outstanding poem, and it's definatley got my nomination and a place on my favorites list. It's very moving and sad. I liked how you listed all the good things you want to remember about this person, and how you described them. It was a very sad poem. I was just about to cry. No flaws with it; I think it's perfect how it is. Just beautiful.

I love it so full of pain and love and I feel your emontions flowing very well done 5/5

Tammi,

I loved this poem its very powerful with the repetition at the end of every stanza helps to reinforce what you are trying to get at and this reinforcing hel;ps to sadden it even further.

you kept it real the whole way through, you said how you would remember them, its down to earth and you didn't build them up to be something in which they never where.

the image of no leaving the stage is something which is powerful. the image of life being like a stage is one which has alwyas been there, and incorportaing that into your poem is something which was brilliant.

your ending is very strong also.You lied to your crowd that last night.
You said you wouldn't leave the stage in the middle
Of a song. And life is the longest song you had to write.
And you left; faded away to nothing.
Is that how I should remember you?
- diff my favorite bit and i'll probally remember it for a very long time.

nomination.