Wow this poem is really deep. I love the flow.i can see u worked hard on this poem. Good job.

You wreck my love and vacate my heart
Leave me solidifying into gold of dust
Snipping arrow from the back till the start
Make it painless to snivel till lust
^I think it would be better if it was dust of gold, as gold of dust doesn’t represent anything, But I understand you have to rephrase as it will be out of rhyme. Oh it doesn’t matter as you need to change the word lust as well it dint fit much with the heart and it having pains.

I have noticed you dint follow any rhyme scheme so I guess it is safe to change it without changing the word lust. This already is a good piece coming from you, they were just my opinions and not necessarily to follow.