This is a really great poem, its really inspirational and gives one hope that life is not just but the negative. Your poem flows really well and the rhymes make it even better, not just by building the flow but they make it interesting to read. Am glad all this is happening to you, its a sure enough proof that better always lie ahead. Brilliant write.

I enjoyed your write. It has some simplicity in it. Yet it's interesting because of the emotion you've poured in it. Nice to read!

Awww! This was so sweet, i hope it all works out for you. 5/5