Comments : Dead End

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Wow, that was very emotional..full of emotions merely sadness...I have been many times in your shoes, and i can tell how hard, painful and heartbreaking situation it was...keep your head up and most especially be strong..Waht doesnt kill you makes you stronger..

    Good rhyming and flows perfectly too..

    Good job..

  • 14 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awe such a sad poem, very well written :) 5/5