Nice poem. It rhymes really well at some places but others dont. Try to make your poem consistent. I got the message behind the poem. Brilliant write.

This is a good poem. the rhyme flow is good. i thought it had a steady beat and those are the kind of poems i like to read. it made me laught when you said all you need was a glass of wine. lol. im like that too. good job and keep it up.

5/5

Reality ; i like that

I liked this a lot and I especially love poems that ryme so round of applause for that one. nice write ^_^

It's not hard to find worda that rhyme. It's hard to put them in a line.