I wish i can vote for this work as many times as i could. Tell ya what Angel, You are a very good writer, i really love this oe!

I wish i can vote for this work as many times as i could. Tell ya what Angel, You are a very good writer, i really love this oe!

Awww that is cute....5/5...I got poems too

Very nice poem and I especially like how you managed to keep a story running while describing emotions. Felt a bit like a short story which for a poem is really difficult to do.

Decent beat and nice rythym, good job.

--ares

I like it. I can see it all happening, therefor the wording was great. Nice length not to long or to short. Made me want to read more.

gave it a 5/5