Comments : Fireworks~Senryu

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Presenting a dance.. that was interesting. I was expecting you to say show or something.. but dance really made me say wow this is brilliant. Great work.. definatly fits in with the Fourth of the July. Beautiful poem written about Fireworks.

    5/5.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Ah, fourth of July...I so love the idea of sitting on the summer grass and watching the fireworks explode...I hope to one day witness this myself:)

    Good job on this, it made me want to see it!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely description... specially loved how you have picturised it as a dance... beautifully penned... :)

  • 8 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Imagery was fiery and well done . Short forms sometimes leave the poem weak but this was strong in vision