Comments : Realization Of Hell

  • 9 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Wow! This is just... Phenomenal.

    I love your style.

    I believe that this could be ever more amazing if the flow was a little more consistant but all the rest of the poem was brilliant.
    So saddd.

    -Osi

  • 9 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I love how you write
    You are an amazing writer and you
    never seize to amaze me.
    I love how you make everything fit
    perfectly together make them flow and
    Rhyme.You word things like never before.
    it was sad though:D
    5/5
    Take Care,
    -Kortney

  • 9 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Dark write wit great flow. With some editing could be perfect but it's a good write as it is.
    Enjoyed this much

  • 9 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Very good imagery , and nice mix of freeverse and rhyme .