Comments : Special Secret

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was amazing girl. Your emotions were really strong in this piece.. but you should stop and realize nobody is perfect and we're all special in our own ways -- but you did a great job using the lyric! Well donee.

    5/5 (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Your special to me hun!!

    You sparkle like distant stars
    I burn out like tired candles.

    these wer my favorite lines

    great job

  • 14 years ago

    by Corruption

    Whoa i love that ending
    "So I let envy paint me green
    as red painted your body."
    that was beautiful i loved it
    but i have to agree with the comment ashley made...
    "You sparkle like distant stars
    I burn out like tired candles."
    those were my favourite lines in the whole poem
    and the last line was a perfect way to end it
    very powerful and very in keeping with the way the poem went
    and the sadness and darkness oozed out of this poem so heavily i felt like i belonged in an asylum... :D
    it was great :)

    Keenan

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    "I wake up in this skin of mine
    and I'm deeply saddened."

    I really like the opening line, I think many of us have felt this kind of sadness, unhappy with who we are and what we see.

    The ending stanza was my favorite part, it is so dark and eerie, it really made me cringe but stop and think as well.

    You have done a nice job here, it was an enjoyable read.

  • 14 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I really like the opening line it brings me in and it reminds me of what we all feel about ourselves

    "I wake up in this skin of mine
    and I'm deeply saddened."

    the line is so grasping the whole poem was great job 5/5!!!!!!!!!

    **plz comment bak**

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Envy is so harsh but I think we all do it.

    A well phrased poem , touched with sadness and guilt.
    A very enjoyable read

  • 14 years ago

    by Exostosis

    "So I let envy paint me green"

    this is some line that garnishes the poem or lets says is the touch to the poem....i love this line very much....

    eh, you are special ...dont you doubt it silly...^^,

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobody

    This poem is so creepy but i can relate to it... my favorite kind of poems are those that linger in my mind. it was a mouthwatering poem that left me thirsty for more keep it up! 5/5