Jeannie
I am never disappointed when reading your writing. Another beautifuly penned piece. Such sadness in your words. The imagery you have created is great!
Love Cindy

My goodness, I wish there were more hours in the day, because I've missed your poetry, and your beauty with words! Well done, as always. xx

Your words are filled with sadness, a sadness that comes with losing our dreams for our life. Well done.

Very sad and full of tragic emotions. I liked the way line flows here. Good piece of writing.