Comments : If tomorrow never comes...

  • 9 years ago

    by Jad

    Good poem. The flow and rhyme was constant throughout the entire poem and I didn't notice anywhere where you needed to make corrections. The poem was true though in its words. A good write and I hope to see more. -Jad

  • 9 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    " I wish I didn't have to hide behind the mask and be who I want to be"

    There was a lot of hurt in this. I can relate with this poem and the the line:
    " If only to know I can love"
    aw >.< when something like this happens its so hard to look forward to anything anymore. We want the answers for what happened . We're human. Its our feelings, then why can't we know why we must feel this way?
    Anyways, ( sorry for the rant) It was beautiful ^_^
    -Angela

  • 9 years ago

    by Alyx

    I think it's amazing...