Comments : World on Fire

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem was written wiith a delightful style
    I sense a passinate depth

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Had only dreamed
    (Im)possible
    Possibilities

    ^^ love how you have written impossible .. could be interpreted in many ways

    Embrace the thrill
    The electricity
    Of the night
    Of a life
    You learn to l()ve

    ^^ a beautiful thought... thats the way to live life... well penned :)

    keep writing

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Single word impact poetry if written well thuds out its message, this is the closest I have read to this type of poetry since I joined the site and I enjoyed its flow and uniqueness very much excellent Ray S 5/5