Hey you! A wonderful captivating poem with vivid imagery, one of the joys of reading this type of poem is its ability to carry you along on a journey and even sometimes to make us internalize and relate it to our own life experiences. With this poem you carried me back to my days at Encounter Overland and a love I left behind....Great job on this intense personalized poem girl. I can see you bumping along in your train in Thailand....

Cheerz Nick

Lovely poem and even a good flow and there is a story love it.