Comments : Lost in the sand

  • 8 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow this is so to the point and right on I have had many friends go to war and come back changed and I think everyone needs to read this to understand y they changed great work 5/5

    Tammi

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    OMG, I like how this poem tells us of a story that boy soldiers come back from the war and they have changed into men. I like your choice of words. 5/5, Em x

  • 8 years ago

    by groovydude

    WOW!!! How incredibly done, the real insight of a soldier. Thank you for your courage and putting it into words. Thank you for my freedom

  • 8 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    Poetry is like paintings. Every word is like a stroke of the brush. This is 1 of the best paintings that I've read in a long time. Poetry was starting 2 get so cliche 4 me. Lost love, depression, death, etc.... It was all the same but this was so beautiful. I have nothing negative 2 say. I don't know any1 that's been out 2 war but I'm sure this is what they feel. U painted such a deep picture in my head, that it made me feel like I was there, that I could almost relate. Not many poets can do that the way u did. I can honestly say that u seem 2 b a natural artist my friend. That was wonderful. A complete 5/5 without a doubt!