Comments : Through the Line

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I'm nominating this poem it was amazing :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the images you have created here. Its
    like watching a movie. Good job with this
    write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem took me by surprise...extremely well written indeed and somehow, because you kept it small the pain oozes out in such a profound way....

    But it never occurred to you,
    To leave before loving her

    ^^
    That is so true...how people think they can built new happiness upon someone elses broken heart is beyond me...

    Well done!

    5/5 Ingrid