Nitin
This poem is stunning....so beautiful yet such a sadness coming from within your words.

If I tell you to sleep with open eyes
Will you still dream of me dying
Hold my hands and kiss my head
Will you still hear me crying

I hope you know how much holding someones hands when they need you means.

Look at the dividing line in air
Separating my skin from your skin
Drowning my soul in your aroma
Repeatedly imagining our sweet sin

Sometimes our minds can bring so many things to us that are unreachable.

If I ask you to be on your knees forever
Will you pray till we meet on the other side
Keep your hands and knees folded
Wrap in my memories within your mind

What a wonderful thought....not a happier warmer place to be then wrapped in the memories of the one you love so much.

I have chased horizon, kissed sun
Yet craving for a touch from you
With angels all around, I walk alone
Wondering if your sky is still blue

Always remember you never will walk alone....and as long as love exists here or there the Sky's will always be blue.

Excellent job on this piece. It really touched my heart and soul. Bringing tears to my eyes.
I love you yaar

Sad indeed. Thoughts of meeting your love on the other side just waiting for them to be with you again. Well done, Nitin.

This was really beautiful yet sad, not sure if theres much more to add to whats been said. This was well written though, & I enjoyed it. Nicely done.

As I read this a scene from the movie Ghost
comes to my mind..a touching write..

Another great one. It has a Nitin touch. Loved it!!!

Nitin,
This is a stunningly beautiful and heartfelt write. From opening to closing you have poured out emotions making this a true gem. Though it has a sadness to it, the love that is emulated throughout the piece speaks volumes. Wonderful Write.

Take Care,
Kay

The sadness in your words has touched the hearts of all who read them.This is another emotionally charged piece that tugs at the heartstrings.
The meaning of this write, i'm here to tell you my friend that it is possible for the one we love to await us on the otherside.This is a promise made by our lord and savior Jesus Christ.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Great poem! N0 m0re can i add

Speechless. So very well written. Emotions are expressed beautifully, lovely construction of the lines. Mesmerizing poem! Amazing!

This is so sad yet beautifully written. Well written, 5/5. Em

What a sad and heartfelt piece. Beautiful job!It flows good and the rhyming isn't forced!

Congrats to you Nitin....a well deserved win for a beautiful poem.
~Bravo~
Love you
Cindy

Congrats on the win Nitin! Such a beautiful and emotional poem full of longing and tenderness.....well crafted and emotional! Bravo!!! Take care, Debbie

I want you to be top rated cause my gurl won't come back , enjoy your time with your thoughts while they are havin fun and over Wheeling

Congrats :]
Way to represent the club.

Sorry for reading this too late, but this one is a beautiful from you, Nitin. The last sentence was the cherry on top of the icing, and the rest was divine.

This one is a 5 for me my friend. a 5 indeed. Walah

I think this is a well deserved win! This poem is fantastic! As I said earlier it's mesmerizing! Congrats Nitin! :)

Congrats for winning.5/5.
You are a creative soul ,truly divine by nature.You pour your heart in your writes.Take care.GOD BLESS.

It bring me the feeling.

Wow Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like it..........