Bitter memories will make us cry when we least expect them too. It just takes one thing to job the memory and bring back those times. Well done.

A touching write... that you have so wonderfully penned. The sadness in your poem can be felt. Those bitter tears...

An excellent poem from you Sourav. Well done.

I agree with the people above :) this was a very emotional piece and well worth the read. I like the flow of it and the simple way it rhymes. I think you did a wonderful job with this and I'm glad I read it. Nik

Sourav,

This is listed under life...but it is so sad...

I loved the wording, so poetic and somehow so resigned.

No matter what you do- how much you try
Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry.

^^

I know exactly what you mean by this, I too am hounted by horrors of my past.

A much beautiful poem, you should be proud of:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

I can't seem to pick a favourite verse or line
because from start to finish each line is
crafted so beautifully with heartfelt words..
liked the read :)

Three simple and yet so deep stanzas. Awesome write friend, loved everything about it. So easy to drown in your words.

all the best and take care

This was a beautiful, lovely yet filled with profound sadness and at the same time revealed such anguish.another excellent piece form you..

" Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry "

great line .... only few can understand the real meaning of this poem....

superb.....

5/5