Comments : Without Deceptions

  • 7 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    I think you wrote this really well. Great job with imagery and word choice! It's a sad write but true in many cases.

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Kuro

    I liked the message your were trying to express. it also has a bit of a transition in it which is cool. and you had nice rhyming. great job
    ~Kuro