Comments : Shadows

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    For one, I loved loved loved the idea of this piece. The layout. Using different forms for each stanza.. I can't say I've seen that done before. Seems like you picked the perfect ones & they worked very nicely together. Second, I loved your imagery in this.. so vividly & easy to picture. Outstanding descriptions that were unique & interesting. Awesome job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The imagery is awesome in this piece it was like watching a movie in my mind almost. You're still one of my favorite poets on this whole site haha keep writing J-bone :p 5/5