Comments : Together We Can Live

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This doesn't surprise me that a great heart such as yours would write this for someone. You're the kind of person who will help someone through difficult times & give them the support they need to get through them. Awesome job..(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    What an amazing write.... so tenderly, and passionately written for your friend. A poem from the heart... Loved it very much. Brilliant Lady Nik..;)

    My favourite lines....

    But I know I'd rather
    breathe for us than
    breathe alone.

    Awesome! lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A comforting poem for your friend. He is lucky to have you in his corner. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by margie

    A very g00d p0em... Luvd it

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    There's not much I can say. Only that this poem was amazing (once again, I know). But truth be told, I love all your poems. This is no exception. I heard the voice of a wise, caring, honest friend while reading. Just...great job Nik. You blow me away every time.

    Kay Jay

    Thank you for the wonderful reads :)