On the last line you put " thorn" when I think you meant to say " torn"

the poem was great hun, it had a lot of detail in it and I like how you wrote it in third person..that added onto the feelings in it. Great job! ((5))

Harlea

That was so beautifull. So well written. I almost can feel the empty bed and laying alone .. Sad to .. Very well written . well done ..

Donna

Be safe and take care xx

Lovely poem! I like the way you wrote this, it was so moving. Your emotions were well expressed, very lively. I could picture it as i read. A poem like that is worth reading. Keep up the good wrok, 5/5.

-Ashlei.