Comments : Spring memories

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Spring is almost here, my favorite season because I know then Summer is just around the corner. I love to see the changes as they occur, the grass greens, leaves sprout out, birds and butterfiles appear. The world coming to life again and love blossoms for the fortunate few. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is just beautiful. Loved the opening verse.... (how spring has finally come and slayed winter..:) )

    Spring finally makes her debut
    slaying winter in an epic battle
    flowers bloom as if on cue,
    memories of her begin to stir.

    "slaying winter in an epic battle.." Love how you worded this... Fantastic!

    Also love the second stanza... ! Lol. How the
    "sun warms the pale skin..." Beautiful!... and
    "songbirds announce the day.."

    Can really feel spring coming in your poem Anthony... and cant wait! Excellent.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Spring is indeed a time for new things to come and for love to rekindle..a lovely write
    with a touch of sadness..

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Anthony
    What a beautiful piece you have penned.

    Spring finally makes her debut
    slaying winter in an epic battle
    flowers bloom as if on cue,
    memories of her begin to stir.

    Wonderful imagery. I can almost smell the flowers perfume in the air. Though I hate to see winter die. You made Spring sound so awesome.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Anthony
    Congrats on your win :) Much deserved.
    *hugs
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I adore the every ounce of love given to this simple spring, and how ature falls into such perfect beauty. I liked the uniqueness of reading about how spring slayed winter and just the overall feeling gave of a fragrant scent of hope. Your descriptions and thoughts on this subject greatly intrigued me, and I found myself completely drawn in by your very soulful words.

    Congratulations on the win, God bless!

    ~MaryAnne