This is so descriptive..well done,.this is a poem written with so much talent..and real feelings. i didn find what i dnt like in this poem..cause i fell in love with the word choice
the flow
the tone

5/5 !

Anthony
I always love reading your work. Great imagery and word choice. Leaves the reader with their heart beating with the thoughts of love :)
Take care
Cindy

Ah, to be this much in love eh?

I think you did really well on this Anthony, I love this line so much:

coy vixen's sly signals
drawing me closer by the hour

^^
I know some women have this power over men, ha ha..and as long as they don't abuse it and are sincere where their intentions are concerned, I am ok with it:)

Good job, deserved win:)

5/5 Ingrid

Very nice flow and very romantic

Congrats Anthony.......very well deserved win :)

Beautiful poem very descriptive and gives me a great visual

An alluring & seductive write with vivid images for the mind..well done and congrats on the win :)

An alluring & seductive write with vivid images for the mind..well done and congrats on the win :)

VISUALLY DELIGHTFUL AND A NICE FINISH! [SOUNDS LIKE i DESCRIBED A WINE....] VERY VERY NICE.